Where are you, my mentors? I need your help!?

I know...isn't Pet wonderful? Love his links too. Your poem had me think of NDE's, I am fascinated by them. I read through your poem a few times. I am not qualified enough to critique but I won't be afraid to tell you how I feel. I like "So many falls turned to harsh winters" ...Ain't it the truth? Thanks for sharing and I wish you the best.